Elle Remick
Professor Carrico; Rhetoric 103A
GSI: Jerilyn Sambrooke
8 October 2016
Iliad
by Homer (Book IX): The Dominance of Masculinity
Homer’s
Iliad accentuates the theme of dominant
masculinity. Through the use of rhetoric, Book IX featuring Achilles’ refusing
argument against Ajax, Odysseus, and Phoenix demonstrates Achilles’ attempt to remain
dominantly masculine.
Towards
the end of Book IX, the passage displaying Achilles’ final dismissal towards
Ajax represents his commitment to masculinity. While he ultimately refuses
Ajax’s offer, Achilles refers to him as the “noble son of Telamon…” (Homer). Using
an allusion, Achilles’ intention behind the remark of Ajax’s father is to
degrade him to a boy’s status; instead of referring to Ajax as an individual
man, Achilles is relating him to a product of someone else that is of a higher caliber.
Thus, Achilles remains dominant. Achilles continues to proclaim his dominance
over Ajax by stating, “You have spoken to my liking…” (Homer). Suggesting that
Ajax’s objective is to please him, Achilles further proclaims dominance through
style. That being said, Achilles makes himself appear more credible than Ajax
and, therefore, the more dominant person through rhetoric. However, not only
does Achilles demonstrate his aim for dominance, he also identifies a threat to
it.
Although
Achilles claims to be dominant, he senses competition against Agamemnon. Achilles
carefully uses an idiom, alliteration, and another allusion to identify his
rage. He moves forward with his speech and states, “But my blood boils when I
think it all over, and remember how the son of Atreus treated me with contumely…”
(Homer). The idiom and alliteration of his boiling blood emphasizes the merit
of his masculine competitiveness. Furthermore, alluding again to the fact that
Agamemnon is the son of Atreus is Achilles’ tactic to seem as the dominant
individual. Achilles continues to show his distress over potentially being
dominated when he claims that Agamemnon treated him “[as] though [I] were some
vile tramp, and that too in the presence of the Argives” (Homer). Not only is
Achilles humiliated that Agamemnon challenged his masculinity by treating him
with disrespect, he also generates the spectacle in front of his army. That
being said, Achilles expresses concern for his masculinity through rhetoric.
Achilles
mentally recovers, and redeems his masculinity; he orders Ajax to deliver the
message to Agamemnon that he will not stoop down to his level and fight. This
noble rhetoric demonstrates that Achilles is the more masculine out of the two,
and he cannot be challenged. In fact, Achilles makes a bold statement when he
says, “I will have no concern with fighting till Hector…flings fire upon their
ships” (Homer). In this rhetoric, Achilles is saying that he is masculine enough
to neutralize the idea of his troops experiencing potential danger. In other
words, Achilles’ amount of masculinity prevents him from feeling any remorse or
sympathy.
Achilles makes one last remark to his
masculinity. Lashing out at Agamemnon, Achilles proclaims, “For all his lust of
battle, I take it he will be held in check when he is at my own tent and ship”
(Homer). As his goal is to make Agamemnon appear inferior, Achilles confidently
announces he will beg him for a truce; Achilles ultimately dominates
Agamemnon’s masculinity.
Book IX in Homer’s Iliad demonstrates the impact Achilles’ rhetoric makes on the theme
of masculine dominance. At first, Achilles recognizes the importance of
masculinity and dominance. Then, his rhetoric is driven by rage and
humiliation. However, Achilles recovers, redeeming his masculinity. By the end
of this passage, Achilles proclaims that his masculinity is dominant.
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