Sunday, October 9, 2016

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Précis: Encomium of Helen

            In Encomium of Helen Gorgias tries to defend Helen, and argues that she should not be accused for her abduction. He wants to “absolve this ill-reputed woman from responsibility, and to show that those who blame her are lying…to put an end to ignorance” (2). To accomplish this, he not only uses particular techniques in his discourse. The discourse he provides in Encomium of Helen magnifies through rhetoric. It is clear here that discourse is powerful, just like Helens beauty is powerful. In this précis, I will be drawing your attention to techniques Gorgias executes when making his discourse on Helen’s innocence in Encomium of Helen.

            Gorgias understands Helen’s beauty, and the effect it has on others. Therefore, Helen is “the foremost of the foremost men and women, by nature and by birth” (3). Furthermore, he mentions, her “godlike beauty” (4). The power her beauty has is depicted in section 4 when he mentions she “produced the greatest erotic desires in most men” (4). These men include those with power and wealth: more importantly, men who have political influence. Through beauty, Helen is able to bring powerful individuals together, and it is through beauty that she is able to influence a political force. With this, Gorgias is able to provide a platform on his argument: because of Helen’s beauty she was already exposed to becoming a victim.

            Gorgias mentions three primary reasons that might have caused Helen to leave and begin her “journey to Troy” (5): Gods will, by force or through “persuasive” (8) discourse. If it is through God that Helen left, then Gorgias argues she is not at fault because “the will of a god cannot be hindered by human forethought” (6). Therefore, anything caused by her leaving is something that is out of her control because all she can do is follow what is in God’s will. If one blames this as the reason, then he argues, “one must quit Helen of infamy” (6). If it through force that she left, then he argues perhaps she did commit “injustice” (7). However, if this is the case, then there should be compassion of her situation. He argues, not only is she ripped away from her homeland, but also taken away from friends: brought into isolation. Due to this, she should not be at fault but rather “hate him” (7), the abductor. Lastly, if it is through discourse that she left, then he argues she should not be responsible because of the power that discourse has. For it can have “a peculiar feeling, on account of the words” (9) to the soul.

            Although Gorgias mentions three possibilities to Helen’s abduction, it is clear he believes it was through discourse Helen left. In this he believes she is innocent, and “wrongly blamed” (12). In Encomium of Helen, Gorgias focuses on the power of discourse. He believes discourse is something that can persuade anyone to do something, as it is “the persuader of the soul”. Therefore, what occurred to Helen was out of her control. Gorgias believes discourse is so powerful he compares it to drugs, and the effect it has on bodies, “the physiology of bodies” (14).

            Throughout Encomium of Helen, Gorgias is strategic in using rhetoric in his discourse to prove Helen’s innocence. It is through his particularity of techniques in his rhetoric that make his argument strong. Interestingly enough, discourse it able to be seen as layers of different elements that bring the innocence of Helen into light. In Gorgias words, discourse “can stop fear and assuage pain and produce joy and make mercy abound” (8).     Discourse can persuade individuals into taking actions that might lead them to be accused and removed of their innocence. However, it is also through discourse that the individual’s innocence can be proven, and ignorance can be put to an end. In Encomium of Helen, Gorgias is able to display the power of rhetoric in a discourse.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Brianna Rogers
Rhetoric 103A
Precis
GSI: Jerilyn Sambrooke


Why I chose this stanza:
This stanza is a great example of the ‘’man's world” we still live in today. Language is important and the language used in this selected text from Encomium of Helen suggests that men are these great, smart, wise, noble, clever creatures that are all drawn to one beautiful woman in which her power over them lies in her erotic beauty, and the way this god like beauty draws greatness towards her. The greatness being men.

"Born of such parentage, she had godlike beauty, which having received she not inconspicuously retained" The language in this first sentence makes it clear that she has RECEIVED her beauty from her parents inherently. She has no ownership of how beautiful she is because it was passed down from her parents genes. It is very important to note the term ‘god like’ when referencing her beauty. Godlike suggests that her beauty was magical and powerful. ‘Inconspicuously retained’ suggests that her beauty was on display at all times. It was not hidden or shy in its existence.

"She produced the greatest erotic desires in most men" This sentence suggests that her beauty was so seductive and enticing, that it brought men to desire her erotically. The concept of desire is perpetuated here using her ‘sexual allure’ figured as an irresistible beauty. It is noteworthy to mention the fact that the language used here suggests that women are sexually objectified. The texts intentionally states that she “produced” the greatest erotic desires in most men. The use of the word ‘produce’ is interesting when used in this context because produce means ‘to bring into existence’. I find it interesting that, in this sentence, through the author's rhetoric, Helen has reclaimed power over her beauty by being the ‘producer’ of the greatest erotic desires in most men. Whereas, in the sentence before, it was said that she had no power of her godlike beauty because it was given to her by her parents. It’s always noteworthy when women are only given power via their bodies or sexually.

"For one body many bodies of men came together", simply saying one person literally brought many people together, yet the use of the word ‘body’ keeps the language provocative and naked even. Again, this suggestive language keeps our mind on the bodies naked flesh which is intentional in keeping our minds on eroticism.

"men greatly purposing great things, of whom some possessed great wealth, some the glory of ancient and noble lineage, some the vigor of personal strength, and others the power of acquired clevernes"
is saying Great men of all spectrums of greatness proposed great things to her. Wealthy men, smart men, noble men, strong men, well studied men all proposed great things to Helen. The words ‘wealth, noble, great,strength, and power’ are all intentional in the text as they are associated with the word great, which is the idea conveyed here.

"And they were all there together out of contentious love and unconquerable ambition" is saying all the great men were all there together (despite any differences) out of their love for a woman who they know the actual act of obtaining her love and affection is unconquerable.